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« on: Sun, August 7, 2005, 16:32:05 »

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I've Been taking more time with coloring lately and I'm at my wits end with this, nothing seems to work. Everything feels seperate and wierd, I have no idea what to do next. Is there something I'm not seeing here?

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« Reply #1 on: Sun, August 7, 2005, 18:35:47 »

1st off. You can NEVER go wrong w/ Aphrodite IX, in my opinion. Not because I liked the story, but because I love green or pink hair. I don't find any real problems w/ the coloring. If you ask me to look real close, though, the thing I notice is the shading coming from different directions. The shading below the sunglasses doesn't seem to fit, to me. I really am not the one to take advice from, though, as I'm not really an artist. I like it though.
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« Reply #2 on: Mon, August 8, 2005, 04:50:13 »

I think the silver in the guns and technology should be there vs being so dark looking.  That would offset and balance the color placement so far on the piece.  Right now I focus on just the woman, which is not bad in and of itself, but there are other cool elements of the drawing as well that are lost right now.
I like Green skinned women and green haired women.
Keep up the good work!!!
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« Reply #3 on: Mon, August 8, 2005, 11:30:56 »

Yeah, the guns and light source need more work. I think the face is the thing that 's bothering me the most though.  I spent the most time on it and it still doesn't feel right.
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